Developmental and Line Editing
Full manuscripts in both fiction and memoir.
I offer questions and observations instead of harsh criticism–I express what my experience was as a reader, and your job will be to see if that aligns with your vision.
Developmental Edits = Higher order issues. I will offer feedback on bigger issue things such as structure, plot, characters, and use of description and details. We can discuss a plan for the story, how to write a beginning or ending to your work, or how to restructure and play with it until it reads just the way you like. In other words, I look at the project as a whole and see how things are working well or where there could be more revision.
Line Edits = Sentence level. Syntax, sentence structure, word usage, dialogue. I will point out lines and details that are beautifully written so you know what your strengths are. I’ll also highlight spots that may be worded in a confusing way, or make suggestions of how to make things flow better. Ultimately, it’s your writing style and your voice that need to come through. Take any suggestions that make sense to you and leave the rest behind!
Book Coaching
This service is ideal for those who are writing a book and need some help along the way. I can offer advice on how to get started, where to go next, set writing goals, and editorial feedback as you go.